My class went to Singapore for a study tour. We stayed there for 6 days. We left to Singapore on the 20th of February and went back on the 26th of February. We stayed in a small Hostel. We went to a school called Anderson.
On the first day, we didn't go to school because it was a Saturday. So we went to the Science Center. There was scientific experiments everywhere there. Overall it is boring. After that we went to Jcube mall. We ate dinner there. We ate at Nando's. It was delicious. They served grilled chicken.
On the second day, we went to church. The church is not that big, it only has a few people. I thought that the church spoke Chinese but surprisingly they spoke Indonesian. The session took quite loneg because they have to translate it to Chinese. After church we went to Universal Studios. It was very hot and crowded. I only got to ride 4 rides.
On the third day, we went to school. After that we went to Chinatown. There was nothing fun about Chinatown. This day was the most boring out of all the days.
The next day we went to school again. Then we went to Marina Gardens by the Bays. It was only filled with beautiful plats and scenery.
On the fifth day, we went to school as usual. After that we went to Bugis Junction. There, we only walk around the mall and eat. Then we went back home.
On the last day we went to Orchard. Since it was the last day, we wasted our money on shopping. I bought some pants, clothes, wallet, and a sunglasses. It was the best day so far in Singapore
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BalasHapusI think this composition is nice. I think there are no mistakes in grammar but there is still mistakes in spelling. But I think this composition is short and not specific and detail about the activities done in each day. I suggest that you include pictures next time. Thanks.
BalasHapusYour story is understandable. There are some mistakes in grammar and also spelling. You should also improve your skill in making the story more exciting and try to avoid using the same words. You did a good work!^^
BalasHapusThere are some mistakes/errors but it is still understandable. In my opinion, you need to add in more details, pictures and also more descriptive and interesting words to make your composition interesting. Well done though!^^
BalasHapusThe way you explained things i like it. It is good, unfortunately there are some mistakes uin grammar and spelling, you should be more aware. You should give some pictures to make it interesting, reading this with no picture is boring.Overall you did a great job, keep it up, train more:D
BalasHapusYour story is no doubt shorter than the other's and less detailed and specific than the other's. There are some grammatical error and spelling error and I think you should improve your skill to make the story more interesting and I really recommend you to add some picture to make it interesting. Well done though there is always time for improvement!
BalasHapusSurpsiringly, your writing is so good, Darren.
BalasHapusIf only you could put more attempts on your study, you would achieve much better results. Keep up your good work.