Dasani is a brand of bottled water made by the Coca-Cola Company, launched in 1999. Dasani is now sold worldwide and now famous. Dasani water is filtered by reverse osmosis and is enhanced for a pure, fresh taste. Dasani has 2 slogans for it's water: DASANI water; can't live without it and Treat yourself well. Everyday. Dasani water actually comes from near the bottling factories all across the U.S.
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Have you got your Dasani yet?
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BalasHapusI think you should make your composition longer and make it more detailed. It is great because I see no grammatical error or spelling error. One thing to say, good job at advertising a product!
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